Tuesday, March 27, 2018

hands



As I was feeling my warm cosy hands I slowly drifted my hands back and forwards I like my hands .because they help me turn A page of a Luscious book they wipe my Tieri eyes when I'm emotional my hands help me erase things when I. make mistake my hands help me hold on to A chain of a swing My hands save me when I fall over they also help me to give people .high fives and hold on to my mum to give her hugs I use my hands mostly to cook and make slime I use my hands to hold onto things like monkey bars , babies, to do handstands, to do maths, I chose my hands because. they are the most important things of my body because I can right things type things drawn things drive things And to cook things my hands. is the most important thing because I can write about anything and because I love 2 Right and draw my hands are precious like a smile .they feel so warm and Luscious my hands are growing and growing as old as I get my hands is as precious as gold and a smile.

Thursday, March 22, 2018

Strolling up sunrise hut


As Room sixteen was strolling up exhausting sunrise hut on a sunny golden day. It felt like ever ending stairs when we got to the rocky carpark and Jumped out of the car Mr Marple. Said ‘’Charli and  Nyah can set the pace’’
As we started strolling up I felt exhausted all my emotions changed I couldn't control my emotions
One of the  parents helped.me preserver up sunrise hut   when I saw the hut I said to myself ‘’did I just do this’’My two legs. were weak It felt so good to sit on the hard wooden seat Mr Marple said we  can have lunch I pulled out my egg sandwich.I took the first bite and my bun was nice and fresh the egg sandwich tasted so nice tasted like I haven't eaten for agers.when I saw the sunrise hut I ran to the seat and banged my head when I raced to the seat

Monday, March 12, 2018

six sentence story

AS Maddison woke up she tried her powers but they wouldn't work she tried and tried each second but nothing well. she did live on mars and yes it was very hot she said in her bed I might be useless now because my powers not working so i'm useless so  what's the point of me trying again because i've tried a million times. so Maddison said should I try again or should I just give up I voice was in her mind no said the voice hoping .beneath her head Maddison said whos that yes i'm going to give up because there's is no chance the voice was in still in her head saying no no because there's no chance that my powers will come back she woke up with her face looking low she tried her powers and they worked she said must of been a dream  .

Thursday, March 8, 2018

Cyclone hits

I te po rahoroi pouri pouri  A hit o te whare saikolone hit whakarere timata rama te tararao atu. a ki runga ki ka rite ki I whakahaere te wairua te whenua o nga whare timata te tio toe.Almost all the Ice had disappeared the murky glacia  was the only thing left most of the urupa was gone at first. when I saw the pearly glacia It looked bright like a diamond I said to myself I have to stay on the maunga to keep myself warm,dry and calm.As I was. walking up the maunga I heard A voice saying ‘’help help’’ I searched high and low under the bush I had fear going through my body I said is this the sky mother I tried to talk to both of them there. eyes closed slowly  before her final goodbye by she said make me and my husband happy. and can you carry us into heaven please ‘’ok’’ I replied  I tried to push with all my mana I couldn't push them so I left them be.








Translation from maori
On a dark gloomy saturday, A heart of a cyclone hit Abandoned houses.
Lights started flickering on and off like a ghost was controlling the land of houses the white pearly glacia  started crackling

Nyahs poem

Nyahs poem
  1. Nyah is a fast lamborghini zipping down the road

2.Nyah is a chicken burger nice and fresh


3.Nyah grew mighty and strong like the tane mahuta tree


4.Nyah is a cookie and cream ice cream waiting to be purchased



5.Nyah is a writing book giving examples

Thursday, March 1, 2018

Dangerous flight

’I’m going to Rarotonga’’ said Lexi on a big Army plane  my dog started barking AS we were going high above the sky lighting was coming up every two minutes I was so frightened When we were.  almost at Rarotonga the lighting struck my dad ‘’NO NO’’ I said my heart started breaking down .I looked down at the controls and I said ‘’I know how to fly a plane because my daddy taught me’’When I put my hand
on the controls I felt my dads touch.