Thursday, September 22, 2016

Our hearts will all ways touch

When I laid there beside you,
Could you feel me there?
My arms were wrapped around you,
And I was stroking your hair.

I was talking about all the good times,
For me they were every single day.
I wanted you to feel love and comfort,
And happy in some way.

I watched your every breath,
And prayed that each one wasn't your last.
The time we got to share together,
Went by too quick...Too fast.

I wanted you to wake up,
Please Mum...Open your eyes.
Tell me this is a nightmare,
And not our goodbyes.

As your last breath grew closer,
We lay there peacefully together.
My heart continually breaking,
Because I wanted you forever.

Then there it was,
Your final breath of air.
I didn't want to believe it,
This is so cruel and not fair.

I held your beautiful face,
And prayed you'd breath again.
I wasn't ready for you to go,
I couldn't admit that this was the end.

But then I realized that you were now in peace,
And not suffering anymore.
You were beginning the life of an Angel,
And your body would no longer be sore.

I held you close and squeezed you tight,
And tried to say goodbye.
I've lost my Mum and my number one best friend,
All my heart could do is cry.

I slowly got up,
I wanted so much to stay.
I leaned over and gave you one more kiss,
It was so hard to walk away.

Mum, you are my entire world,
And I miss you so very much.
I wish I could feel your lovable cuddle,
And your soft and gentle touch.

But for now I have to wait,
Until we meet again.
You will always be in my heart and thoughts,
My dear Mum and best friend.     

Always and Forever,
Our hearts will always touch.
Always and Forever,
Your baby girl loves you so very much.





The reason I think this is a good poem is because:
The person who wrote this has full stops and capital letters.
I like sad poems because my brother died and these sad poems remind me of my brother.
It had really nice words.
 

My holiday story

SATURDAY 17th September 2016 My hoilday story
At 12.00 I went to Frimley park with my sister and my
At Frimley park we had a pinick and I loved the playground .the playground
Was my thing at the park was the playground I could smell the flowers
The flowers smelled nice when we finished at the park. we went to my brothers house
And ask his son if he wanted to come to the hot pools he said yes
His mum and dad packed his clothes and we drove to the hot pools we drop
My brothers son off at 3.30 the end.

Kapa haka

Kapa Haka  
Today at Frimley School the Kapa Haka group went to Hastings
Intermediate to do a performance.   The people that went to Kapa Haka from  my class were Jaedyn, Tristan, Cameron, Liam, Kingston,  Jahmelia, Manaia and Riley.  

Once  the Kapa Haka people had left  our classroom there was only 16 of us left.  Two  people from room 17  came into join us in room 18.   Their names were  Dilshaan and Nathaniel And Jacob.

Tuesday, September 20, 2016

My 3 cat poem

Cute, cuddly, clever
Awesome, Adorable, Amazing
Timid, tired, tolerant
Sly, soft, silent
cats

My cat poem

MY 2nd CAT POEM

Cats love milk

Cats run fast

Cats don’t like swimming

Cats are cute and cuddly

Cats love to play

I love cats

My 1st Cat Poem

My 1st Cat Poem

Cats have nice soft fur

Cats have different colored eyes

Cats are all different colours

Cats can sleep up to 13 to 14 hours  

Cats are awesome

Sunday, September 18, 2016

my cinquain poem about my mum

Mum
Pretty, kind
Likes to sleep
Funny, makes me laugh
Worker  


Tuesday, September 13, 2016

My summer poem

Summer

Summer is as hot as an oven


You can get sunburnt from the hot sun  

You play with your friends in summer

In summer you go to the beach and go to the pools

Summer feels like an oven burning you

You need an icy cold drink and an ice block

Monday, September 12, 2016

Autobilographical

Nyah
Brown ,eyes brown black hair
I am in a family of 8
I love the love that my family give me
I feel loved by my family
I need food, clothes, love and sleep and work
I give money to poor people
I fear snakes  and spiders
I would like to see people help old people
I dream that the world will be a better place
A friend in my class is Brooke and Charlotte and my teacher’s name is Sally
My nickname is Teddy Bear


By Nyah

Thursday, September 8, 2016

Cross country Reflection

  • I learnt to not bolt off but to sprint off at the start but when it is a race bolt off fast like the flash .

  • I liked running because people can get fit .

  • Next time I want to run faster in the next cross country .

  • I trained at Frimley park for running and cross country.

  • I did not enjoy me running slow so next time I want to run faster.
Cross country by Nyah Frimley school cross country


On Wednesday the 31st August the years 4, 5 and 6 children  went to Frimley Park  for our school  cross country.  We do the cross country for fitness and to see who is the fastest of each year girl.   I came 35th in the year four girls race.  During my race I was really nervous.   Once I had started running my sister yelled out “well done, keep on running”.  I got really puffed and stopped and that is when my sister said  “do you want  me to run with you?” I said “yes’’.

When I got to the finish line people were cheering for me.  I was running with my sister, Mr Jay and Amy from room 16, Aimee came 34th in the cross country.  After my race my sister took me to the playground at Frimley park.  My favourite things at the park was the eagles nest, the swing, the slide and the drums.  When I was finished at the playground my sister and I went to watch my other sister in the year 5 girls race.   My sister came last.


When I had  finished my Mum said “well done” she was proud of me even though I had come last.

I had fun in cross country and  even though I came last  my friend Amy in room 16 said “well done” and I said to  Aimee “well done to you too”.  She said you had run really hard and my sister had said that I had run really fast.


My sister’s running race was after the year 4 boys.  She lined up and then Mr White clapped the clappers together and then my sister took off as fast as a cheater.   


When all the races were finished Mr White got the people to come up to the front who had come 1st, 2nd and 3rd.  My friend Maia ,from my class came 2nd.  I can’t wait until the next cross country I will try to run harder and faster.