in amiras shoes

Hearing loud bangs .hitting roof tops people's homes blowing up

One by one people dying bodies waiting to be carried

Out of the premises. Bodies pouring out dark red blood

Help Help !!! I said’’ in a scared voice.

It's the first time i’ve seen bodies and heaps of blood.

I know I had t.o keep running before they kill me

Glaring at the night sky looking up at the. pitch black sky

I saw nothing falling I hear men saying let's go and see

If any have lived.

5 of my family members have died 10 are wounded

We kept knocking on doors going GET OUT !!!

I want to go see my village .again I said in a quiet

Voice to myself I was crying my heart out

I prayed to my 5 family members who we're know

Longer here .

Bombs falling from the sky people screaming

Bodies bullets flying. right and left I prayed for

1 hour I laid by my mum and dad I kissed them and

Said my final goodbye.

independed writing

1/07/2017

Scary monsters creeping quickly with no noise to here I stepped in the swamp quickly. and quietly block my nose held my mouth shut tight water murky looking firstly I trenched  around and around quietly looking at

The surface.Thinking to myself I have. to complete my challenge

As I forced myself to get in the swamp I saw with my own 2 eyes a alligator

I yell no one there ran yelling help help !!!!!!!  calmly walking back to the swampland chipping my fingers stormed  thru. the swamp like a soulja I

Was jumping up and down with joy said  to myself I'm’’ going to celebrate with one to crack open can't wait until. I have a nice cold drink after my hard day out it to me

24 hours in the freezing cold winter night.    

frozen winter days remake

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Tweck  tweck time to get up from my peaceful sleep the monotone voice calmly whistled.Sluggishly I turned my limp sleepy body and stretched my arm wide to put out my peaceful alarm clock.  

Silence deafened my ears as I lay in my comfortable bed. The air was as still as a statue. Not a sound of car engines roaring like a harley davidson down the road. No birds whistling and chirping in the trees nature's very own alarm clock.

Quickly peeling the soft warm blankets of my body like a plaster wound Frosty crisp Dunedin air surrounded my body with itchy blankets but didn’t like this particular  blanket so much. Softly like a flash down the long cascading mysterious haunted hall reaching the end of the hall, I placed my fingertips onto the shiny gold door knob and rotated to the right. The glare was too much for my eyes. What was going on? Kaikorai valley with amazing winter colours had spun around and was pearly pure white.

This document is by charli Nyah hope you read this thankyou if you do read our remaking of mrs bartlett and mr marples writing hope all stay warm when its snowing and stay safe